tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post1054948114408137641..comments2024-03-28T11:48:59.566+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Valentine's Day by Casey RobbCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-13713244417526460882015-02-15T20:18:08.194+00:002015-02-15T20:18:08.194+00:00This takes you on a thrilling journey with a good ...This takes you on a thrilling journey with a good ending. Well done! S Lucashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10337704356672999238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-7452249054649441802014-12-31T12:56:49.646+00:002014-12-31T12:56:49.646+00:00I'm exhausted after reading this tense thrille...I'm exhausted after reading this tense thriller! The line "I've got to get used to the perfume here - Eau de State Institution" made me laugh and think, "This is going to be a good story." Great job naming the "Mule Kick Motel." No need to describe the place with a name like that. The author does an excellent job of "showing" instead of "telling" and the twist at the end is fantastic.Margihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05090563380961547548noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-53933912789866651762014-12-29T15:53:35.554+00:002014-12-29T15:53:35.554+00:00Just like one of those dreams when you're urge...Just like one of those dreams when you're urgently trying to get somewhere important and everything keeps stalling and getting in the way! The characters are believable, and the dilemmas engage the reader. Well done,<br />CeinwenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-90027887651667346112014-12-29T15:03:05.692+00:002014-12-29T15:03:05.692+00:00this is a roller coaster ride, but it all seems cr...this is a roller coaster ride, but it all seems credible with well drawn characters and a convincing but breathless story! <br />well done<br /><br />Michael McCarthy Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com