tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post1112833886392979920..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: A Free Pass With Elvis by Mark RigneyCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-55271716032053083512012-10-28T22:18:09.305+00:002012-10-28T22:18:09.305+00:00Well written, fast paced and very clever. I enjoy...Well written, fast paced and very clever. I enjoyed the humor and the insight into married life.Burt Baumnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-84158340220236755982012-10-03T13:30:30.496+01:002012-10-03T13:30:30.496+01:00Great short story -- few words, used wisely. Not ...Great short story -- few words, used wisely. Not only funny, but relateable. Who hasn't had a conversation with their spouse about "out of reach" celebs?<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11405010085906229278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-37281664292306253632012-10-02T03:47:14.787+01:002012-10-02T03:47:14.787+01:00The fun of the puzzle at the end: it's not jus...The fun of the puzzle at the end: it's not just who's speaking, but where they're looking when they open their mouths. Vivid.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-81375062326996891762012-10-02T03:16:50.354+01:002012-10-02T03:16:50.354+01:00Brilliance:
"Thus began a period of theoretic...Brilliance:<br />"Thus began a period of theoretical infidelity rarely equaled in the history of humanity."<br />Great story. I love its voice and humor. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-14238387216298606742012-10-01T22:57:50.113+01:002012-10-01T22:57:50.113+01:00Fun! I loved the "high sweep of jet-black hai...Fun! I loved the "high sweep of jet-black hair" and the real Italian shoes as the only descriptives! And that "No!" telling exactly how the couple looked and how He looked when they said it . . . Ann Enoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-5098766699481481882012-10-01T21:45:14.052+01:002012-10-01T21:45:14.052+01:00Clever and wise; Mark should consider a stage and/...Clever and wise; Mark should consider a stage and/or film adaptation and expand it. Fine writer.Jerry L. Crawfordnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-1896807327620108952012-10-01T20:43:12.762+01:002012-10-01T20:43:12.762+01:00Very witty. A terrific, quick mid-day escape. Keep...Very witty. A terrific, quick mid-day escape. Keep 'em coming Mark!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-46917583071360797472012-10-01T19:50:02.054+01:002012-10-01T19:50:02.054+01:00This story made me smile and laugh. I would like i...This story made me smile and laugh. I would like it better if I knew A) who showed up in the end and B) who said what at the end. I admit I'm scratching my head. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com