tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post1358838986943102321..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: See No Evil by Danielle Lenée DavisCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-62946999782444551552013-07-31T11:52:14.464+01:002013-07-31T11:52:14.464+01:00Enjoyable and an easy read. Perhaps a little too ...Enjoyable and an easy read. Perhaps a little too much description for the short-story format, but ideal in a novel. Good luck with yours!<br />BerylAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-29703788435500793542013-07-28T01:46:36.491+01:002013-07-28T01:46:36.491+01:00Hon, I was writing my comment as you posted yours...Hon, I was writing my comment as you posted yours. Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.Danielle Lenee Davishttp://danielleleneedavis.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-31931094421429252432013-07-28T01:44:47.284+01:002013-07-28T01:44:47.284+01:00Thank you. Yes, it's true that two brown eyed ...Thank you. Yes, it's true that two brown eyed people can have a blue eyed baby, but that's not the scenario here. The abductor and her husband had blue eyes. The biological parents and the baby had brown eyes. <br /><br />Thanks Jim. I am working on my first novel featuring Sydney Valentine as the main character.Danielle Lenee Davishttp://danielleleneedavis.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-56170105773290372392013-07-28T01:39:38.079+01:002013-07-28T01:39:38.079+01:00Once you start reading, you can't stop! I'...Once you start reading, you can't stop! I'm ready for a novel from this author!Honhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00293503076525988932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-21005580942645529062013-07-28T00:28:00.623+01:002013-07-28T00:28:00.623+01:00The people were blue-eyed and the baby was brown-e...The people were blue-eyed and the baby was brown-eyed.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-52927645226846674492013-07-27T11:52:56.928+01:002013-07-27T11:52:56.928+01:00This was good, although a little too much descript...This was good, although a little too much descriptio of what people were wearing and it IS possible for 2 brown eyed people to have a blue eyed baby. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-71867440665662174282013-07-26T16:15:06.798+01:002013-07-26T16:15:06.798+01:00Nice little detective story - well wrapped up in s...Nice little detective story - well wrapped up in short form, something that is hard to do. I imagine we'll be hearing more of Ms Valentine! Jim Bartletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03429957545169700110noreply@blogger.com