tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post1567433844458683758..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: The Rebellion by Beryl Ensor-SmithCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-36331046964264037162014-10-16T16:15:00.661+01:002014-10-16T16:15:00.661+01:00Thanks for your comments, Brooke - and I don't...Thanks for your comments, Brooke - and I don't believe for a moment that your mouth ever compresses into a "wrinkled prune"!!<br />Best wishes,<br />Beryl.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-14274839242142199612014-10-16T10:26:41.806+01:002014-10-16T10:26:41.806+01:00No end of invention in this story. I loved the des...No end of invention in this story. I loved the description of the City Dominee as he preached, and the...'he has a darkness, a murky darkness about him'!<br />A really good read!<br />I shall go away now, continue my humdrum daily tasks, and no doubt soon come upon something which causes my mouth to compress 'into a wrinkled prune of disapproval'!<br />Brooke Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17142492723192523556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-58400407067549341332014-10-15T07:14:30.207+01:002014-10-15T07:14:30.207+01:00Hi, Laura,
Your encouragement is much appreciated....Hi, Laura,<br />Your encouragement is much appreciated. Writing isn't always easy but it is a joy, and so good to know it gives pleasure to others.<br />Thank you.<br />BerylAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-85867715605394703782014-10-15T07:10:22.117+01:002014-10-15T07:10:22.117+01:00Thanks for your comments, James. Wish I could get...Thanks for your comments, James. Wish I could get my series featured on radio!! Meantime, it's simply good to have them published and enjoyed.<br />Best wishes,<br />Beryl.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-43047338884579234372014-10-15T07:07:16.437+01:002014-10-15T07:07:16.437+01:00Always good to hear from you Jim. There are a few...Always good to hear from you Jim. There are a few more in the series, yes, and as Sarie is one of my favourite characters, she'll be in some of them. Keep well!<br />BerylAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-67061111832026226042014-10-15T00:58:40.897+01:002014-10-15T00:58:40.897+01:00Loved this, got quite a laugh at the "sisters...Loved this, got quite a laugh at the "sisters" and loved them all. Especially Sarie with her habit - could see this nun walking a bow-tied pig. Keep writing more like this one. You have a fan base.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02708119926194520852noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-53207559586352270482014-10-14T19:47:32.176+01:002014-10-14T19:47:32.176+01:00Episode 1 - "The Golden Girls of Prentburg&qu...Episode 1 - "The Golden Girls of Prentburg" - wherein Sarie takes on a habit she's not easily willing to give up. Like the course of true love, the journey towards God is not straight and smooth. <br />The dialogue and characters were just great. The plots, the planning, the snippets of conversation, made the characters come alive. <br />Like Ceinwen, I can imagine this on the radio...'and now BBC Radio 4 presents...'<br /><br />James Shaffer Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-16621515666385079152014-10-14T15:23:53.839+01:002014-10-14T15:23:53.839+01:00Ceinwen nailed it - this was definitely quite a &q...Ceinwen nailed it - this was definitely quite a "hoot." Why do I get the feeling we haven't heard the last of Sarie and her habit?<br />Fun story, Beryl.Jim Bartletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03429957545169700110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-43357216155118430222014-10-14T13:43:22.735+01:002014-10-14T13:43:22.735+01:00Hi Ceinwen,
Thanks for your comments. So pleased ...Hi Ceinwen,<br />Thanks for your comments. So pleased you enjoyed the story!<br />Best wishes,<br />BerylAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-78013789901315325962014-10-14T12:42:32.344+01:002014-10-14T12:42:32.344+01:00What a hoot - great fun - could possibly form the ...What a hoot - great fun - could possibly form the basis for a radio play? Oh the idiosyncrasies of the pure of heart!<br />Thank you,<br />Ceinwen Haydon Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com