tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post2290283292101725405..comments2024-03-29T10:50:47.715+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Shooting Star by K. M. FieldsCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-21555498166064395012016-10-24T09:23:52.249+01:002016-10-24T09:23:52.249+01:00Very skillful writingVery skillful writingBruce Costellohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08192248044937185344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-51434756638940653162016-10-23T16:18:25.921+01:002016-10-23T16:18:25.921+01:00Fantastic piece - the voice executed so perfectly....Fantastic piece - the voice executed so perfectly. Positive and sweet, but the hard edges resonate as well. Bravo! Thanks.Nancy Lanenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-22489245431035144562016-10-23T15:21:27.618+01:002016-10-23T15:21:27.618+01:00Lovely story - celebrating joy but rooted in grit....Lovely story - celebrating joy but rooted in grit. Great contrasts. Thank you,<br />CeinwenAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11145727006327466838noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-60744524473952455122016-10-23T12:17:55.468+01:002016-10-23T12:17:55.468+01:00this is a first class story, revealing, funny, sad...this is a first class story, revealing, funny, sad and beautifully descriptive.<br />excellent<br /><br />Mike McCAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-47285303132693689152016-10-23T11:23:21.581+01:002016-10-23T11:23:21.581+01:00Sweet story...I enjoyed the library book metaphor ...Sweet story...I enjoyed the library book metaphor used to describe 'Mama's' relationship with men after Dad died!<br />B r o o k e Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17142492723192523556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-67220150675882607682016-10-23T09:36:42.381+01:002016-10-23T09:36:42.381+01:00This is such a wonderful story. It just keeps gett...This is such a wonderful story. It just keeps getting better as it goes on. I love the line about the sound of the bibles on the back seat of the convertible. The voice of the narrator has exactly the right feel too - not an easy thing to do. Congratulations to you!<br />S.LucasAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-52006405873196916072016-10-23T08:52:14.399+01:002016-10-23T08:52:14.399+01:00A beautiful story, beautifully told.
I really enj...A beautiful story, beautifully told.<br /><br />I really enjoyed it, thank you, K.M. Fields.Louisa Campbellnoreply@blogger.com