tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post2497557834468581999..comments2024-03-28T08:51:20.299+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: The Wedding Finger by Andy PeacockCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-14874007864540870202021-06-25T21:31:10.232+01:002021-06-25T21:31:10.232+01:00I'm sorry, I did get the climax. Did Charlie h...I'm sorry, I did get the climax. Did Charlie had no fingers? Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-24732050601734622032012-08-29T08:50:54.180+01:002012-08-29T08:50:54.180+01:00I agree with Mccarthy. The story is excellent, tho...I agree with Mccarthy. The story is excellent, though, I do not understand the first sentence:<br /><br />"Charlie studied the man sat directly in front of him."<br /><br />I thought that:<br /> <br />"Charlie studied the man who sat directly in front of him." was more appropriate.<br /><br />Perhaps I am wrong.<br /><br />Welldone, Andy.<br /><br />Chiaka ObasiAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-91987226057335263002012-08-28T09:15:41.378+01:002012-08-28T09:15:41.378+01:00right from the beginning, you are caught up in a g...right from the beginning, you are caught up in a growing sense of dread, it´s probably because of charlie´s resigned almost good humour.<br />but the business like attitude of the first man plays well against this, allied to the second man´s brutal impatience.<br />excellent story.<br /><br />michael mccarthyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com