tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post3037832042869339412..comments2024-03-29T14:45:42.371+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: The Portal by William Quincy BelleCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-89566834739073310302015-03-16T16:27:44.441+00:002015-03-16T16:27:44.441+00:00A well-paced story. You have a realistic understa...A well-paced story. You have a realistic understanding of African politics, which is all about power and corruption. There is also a general lack of ability to think beyond today. I enjoyed your "device" - what a useful thing to possess - wish I had one! I think the second part of your story would be more effective with a bit of pruning, but all in all it was an interesting read and well presented.<br />Beryl.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-55754238409265127232015-03-10T21:16:20.354+00:002015-03-10T21:16:20.354+00:00A strange and complex tale - well worth a read. C...A strange and complex tale - well worth a read. Celestine is an intrguing woman, will we hear more of her in future work? <br />CeinwenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-71281546686400179352015-03-10T21:14:08.887+00:002015-03-10T21:14:08.887+00:00Civil wars in Africa seems topical. I find the us...Civil wars in Africa seems topical. I find the uses of the teleportation device odd. Is there only one? How long has it been in existence? Could its secrecy be maintained long?Doug Hawleynoreply@blogger.com