tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post3184065837298867710..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: The Tiki Statue by Derek Muk Charlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-35855244271597290632014-12-22T20:24:31.977+00:002014-12-22T20:24:31.977+00:00Hello Derek, I'm back.
Whether the first chapt...Hello Derek, I'm back.<br />Whether the first chapter of a full length novel, or a stand-alone story I enjoyed this tale of mystery. I liked the salt-n-pepper spectacle-raising bonhomie of the professorial duo, and could really imagine myself watching Taylor schmoozing with veggies and jewellery makers at the North Shore meditation retreat. Skilful integration of dialogue with narrative gives for an easy flow, and yes, I too would like to read more.<br />Brooke Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17142492723192523556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-72509451943560634362014-12-22T20:12:02.684+00:002014-12-22T20:12:02.684+00:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17142492723192523556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-61943235210823564742014-12-22T17:41:36.168+00:002014-12-22T17:41:36.168+00:00Hi Derek, Certainly anthropology has such a wide r...Hi Derek, Certainly anthropology has such a wide range of subjects to write about, and your man has the additional skill of performing exorcism. This certainly has the making of a much longer story as there has to be more to come and be resolved. I wasn't quite sure what you were aiming for, thriller adventure, or comical adventure it seemed to waiver between the two. I hope you continue writing this to develop the plot. James McEwan.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-42773038837161912972014-12-21T12:00:10.956+00:002014-12-21T12:00:10.956+00:00More things in heaven and earth..... Chilling and ...More things in heaven and earth..... Chilling and well crafted, this feels like the first chapter of further manifestations and struggles between god and evil?<br />Thank you,<br />CeinwenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com