tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post3323660164357246194..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Tolerance by Jack McKenzieCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-85332596096092959652013-06-06T20:24:50.062+01:002013-06-06T20:24:50.062+01:00That was really good! I knew something was up, but...That was really good! I knew something was up, but was not expecting that. Katie Gilbertsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00551418803286900837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-13271647465835090972013-05-26T15:47:18.145+01:002013-05-26T15:47:18.145+01:00An interesting and well written story about precon...An interesting and well written story about preconceptions making people blind. I knew something was coming ,but I did not suspect it would be this kind of an ending. Irena Pasvinterhttps://sites.google.com/site/ipscribblings/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-87078090252179751502013-05-22T13:28:44.362+01:002013-05-22T13:28:44.362+01:00Liked the story-especially the interplay between H...Liked the story-especially the interplay between Harry and Alice and the big guys obvious lie about his great Christmas.Paul Beckmanhttp://www.paulbeckmanstories.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-41500096782399602932013-05-11T17:42:49.272+01:002013-05-11T17:42:49.272+01:00Tone of story very good. Brings the reader in, agr...Tone of story very good. Brings the reader in, agreeing with Harry that something is wrong, but what exactly? And how many of us would bother to question when uneasy about the situation? Like the interaction between husband and wife.<br />A D NohrAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-76477818375916220402013-05-11T05:23:45.148+01:002013-05-11T05:23:45.148+01:00I love the way that it builds from the ordinary to...I love the way that it builds from the ordinary to the horrifying. The tension was done just right, you had me hooked. I wanted to find out what was going on, and the ending paid off perfectly. Sent a chill down my spine.Candice Carnesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-36065454229956390152013-05-10T12:31:43.159+01:002013-05-10T12:31:43.159+01:00A good title for the story too as you have to thin...A good title for the story too as you have to think about what they were tolerant of at the end of the story also.<br /><br />Garreth KeatingAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-61670613022438437622013-05-08T20:30:00.107+01:002013-05-08T20:30:00.107+01:00Good use of foreshadowing in this interestinglitle...Good use of foreshadowing in this interestinglitle tale.Brenda Bradfordnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-74874916729336348442013-05-07T16:16:01.437+01:002013-05-07T16:16:01.437+01:00There's a nice undertone of tension, well guis...There's a nice undertone of tension, well guised by the oblivious gab of Alice and the "put out" attitude of Harry. Fun readJim Bartletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03429957545169700110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-72682416358471105412013-05-07T16:13:59.577+01:002013-05-07T16:13:59.577+01:00This comment has been removed by the author.Jim Bartletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03429957545169700110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-52291843740419720822013-05-07T09:38:08.639+01:002013-05-07T09:38:08.639+01:00very good indeed.
you really set the scene for so...very good indeed. <br />you really set the scene for something and it didn´t disappoint.<br /><br />Michael McCarthyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com