tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post3556488616188355682..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: The Date by Laura A. ZinkCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-49480643307886413492018-01-25T03:33:05.849+00:002018-01-25T03:33:05.849+00:00I liked how you seamlessly went back and forth bet...I liked how you seamlessly went back and forth between POV's, and how both of them were fractured with painful flashbacks, one psyche obviously more fractured and damaged than the other.Edward Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07490305499236322340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-23892504720893265552017-12-16T17:40:10.227+00:002017-12-16T17:40:10.227+00:00first class story, has a great noirish feel to it,...first class story, has a great noirish feel to it, and superbly drawn characters.<br />Mike McCAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-33706857244653717202017-12-16T06:09:24.016+00:002017-12-16T06:09:24.016+00:00Tough, tough story, and I'm glad I read it.Tough, tough story, and I'm glad I read it.Acarasiddhihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01477501020659900550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-40512308272317493962017-12-15T23:16:02.311+00:002017-12-15T23:16:02.311+00:00Wow! First rate story, well done! Like watching a ...Wow! First rate story, well done! Like watching a true crime film - so visual. And the tension, building, but controlled. Excellent, Laura. Thank you.Nancy Lanenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-2034211324435020002017-12-15T18:57:33.046+00:002017-12-15T18:57:33.046+00:00Intense story. Excellent job of getting inside the...Intense story. Excellent job of getting inside the chatacters’ heads, especially Tevin’s. David Hensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13683380054995884030noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-73872330961634799962017-12-15T09:57:17.652+00:002017-12-15T09:57:17.652+00:00Strong, vivid writing that navigates two life-time...Strong, vivid writing that navigates two life-times in a short story fraught with tension and loss. Psychologically savvy and well realised. Many thanks,<br />CeinwenAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11145727006327466838noreply@blogger.com