tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post370374779564450226..comments2024-03-29T12:58:34.121+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Smoldering in Reeve by Kyle PolichtCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-91658561105837916342014-03-30T23:46:34.337+01:002014-03-30T23:46:34.337+01:00Very well executed. Like the others said, the gun...Very well executed. Like the others said, the gunfight was expertly described. It reads fast and fluidly. Pathoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03446639038119049404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-42977655906798974402014-03-24T20:00:40.118+00:002014-03-24T20:00:40.118+00:00This is some of the toughest kind of writing (acti...This is some of the toughest kind of writing (action) to do well and you've done it really well.Tim Macynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-80622013513875762052014-03-23T15:33:47.040+00:002014-03-23T15:33:47.040+00:00that was a good old battle Scene. agree with Jim, ...that was a good old battle Scene. agree with Jim, well presented.<br /><br />good characters.<br /><br />Michael McCarthyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-76898961292376944602014-03-23T15:07:04.793+00:002014-03-23T15:07:04.793+00:00Intense gun battle scene. Short, quick sentences a...Intense gun battle scene. Short, quick sentences at the end help ramp up the action. Jim Bartletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03429957545169700110noreply@blogger.com