tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post3725150573363953845..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Timeline of a Crush By Rosemary Cacolice BrownCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-90904742406217213102015-09-03T07:57:39.184+01:002015-09-03T07:57:39.184+01:00Sweet tale. I felt the excitement of first love an...Sweet tale. I felt the excitement of first love and the pangs of loss. Everyone remembers their first love and the car they drove. This captured those young, raw feelings. Great writing and good imagery! We need to read more from this author. Natasha13https://www.blogger.com/profile/00022723248816811456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-27673775597967099012015-09-01T09:07:47.540+01:002015-09-01T09:07:47.540+01:00really well written, i could feel the agonies and ...really well written, i could feel the agonies and turmoil of Andy.<br />how something brings back not just memories but feelings<br />fine story<br />well done<br />Mike McCAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-84996725657907279422015-09-01T08:31:54.746+01:002015-09-01T08:31:54.746+01:00This story captures the incidental power of the tr...This story captures the incidental power of the triggers that catapult us back into the past. - then the young 'you' has the chance to walk awhile with the older 'you'. This makes for a nice gentle rooted in well observed and telling details. You also captured the torment of the young - a world in which everything is everything - no half measures. Thank you,<br />CeinwenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com