tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post4326200927657405109..comments2024-03-29T10:50:47.715+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: A Smell of Paint by Anne GoodwinCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-7301995067304078482016-05-25T11:30:40.124+01:002016-05-25T11:30:40.124+01:00Shameless plug, but only because the site doesn... Shameless plug, but only because the site doesn't publish bios, but there's more of my writing on my website including my debut novel, Sugar and Snails<br />http://annegoodwin.weebly.com/sugar-and-snails.htmlAnne Goodwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04184575753612760952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-78687713230173652302016-05-25T11:28:47.069+01:002016-05-25T11:28:47.069+01:00 Thanks, Nancy, and good to meet you here. Thanks, Nancy, and good to meet you here.Anne Goodwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04184575753612760952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-29946895156363286752016-05-25T11:28:21.072+01:002016-05-25T11:28:21.072+01:00 Thanks, Mike. I do strive for for tightness in m... Thanks, Mike. I do strive for for tightness in my writing, but a canny editor could probably exercise a couple more words!Anne Goodwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04184575753612760952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-48498180132446292712016-05-25T11:27:11.874+01:002016-05-25T11:27:11.874+01:00 Thank you so much for reading and commenting Thank you so much for reading and commentingAnne Goodwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04184575753612760952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-46819756598178472552016-05-25T11:26:50.869+01:002016-05-25T11:26:50.869+01:00 Thanks, Jim, I appreciate your feedback. Thanks, Jim, I appreciate your feedback.Anne Goodwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04184575753612760952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-66692486959617732142016-05-25T11:26:29.631+01:002016-05-25T11:26:29.631+01:00Thank you and I love how you've picked up on t...Thank you and I love how you've picked up on the symbolism.Anne Goodwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04184575753612760952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-1131642891978449432016-05-25T11:25:33.809+01:002016-05-25T11:25:33.809+01:00Thanks so much everyone for your kind comments and...Thanks so much everyone for your kind comments and so glad you liked the story.Anne Goodwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04184575753612760952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-54999632138827328262016-05-25T07:35:35.853+01:002016-05-25T07:35:35.853+01:00Great story! The end is heartbreaking. And as some...Great story! The end is heartbreaking. And as someone who has experienced the shifting of rooms in a family house. It does bring issues you wouldn't expect. That was nicely captured. <br /><br />-David E. J. BergerAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12581301549981813867noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-62576416952848288842016-05-23T10:22:10.464+01:002016-05-23T10:22:10.464+01:00Oh heartache! You want your baby to come home, but...Oh heartache! You want your baby to come home, but not at any cost.<br />The symbols of the butcher - carnal, carnivorous, and juxtaposed against the search for light work well...And painting still lives - they must be still. The reader feels strong empathy for the mother.<br />B r o o k eAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17142492723192523556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-70699654420148239182016-05-22T17:38:04.516+01:002016-05-22T17:38:04.516+01:00Wonderfully told - touching on so many themes. I e...Wonderfully told - touching on so many themes. I enjoyed it. Bravo!Nancy Lanenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-77797757729300022792016-05-22T15:25:10.684+01:002016-05-22T15:25:10.684+01:00a very powerful and personal piece of work with no...a very powerful and personal piece of work with not a word wasted.<br />excellent<br /><br /><br />Mike McCAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-65105396547854767282016-05-22T13:50:08.915+01:002016-05-22T13:50:08.915+01:00A compelling story that plumbs the depth of disord...A compelling story that plumbs the depth of disordered love. A strong an engaging read, thank you,<br />CeinwenAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11145727006327466838noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-75414924201128821702016-05-22T12:29:30.372+01:002016-05-22T12:29:30.372+01:00Everything about this story grabs you, sits you in...Everything about this story grabs you, sits you in a chair, and says, "Read." It's wonderfully written, and compelling. Visual and chocked with emotion. Really good, Anne. <br /><br />JimAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com