tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post4505984504897184201..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: White Army Stand by Michael SaadCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-40527824318523790912018-03-16T05:54:40.506+00:002018-03-16T05:54:40.506+00:00I remember dear by about a story along this one by...I remember dear by about a story along this one by Ellison in the late.1960's or early 1970's.ToriiWhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10017184885964434058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-46540746686705546322015-04-20T19:04:30.348+01:002015-04-20T19:04:30.348+01:00Maybe someone can answer this because my old man m...Maybe someone can answer this because my old man memory is so feeble. Did Harlan Ellison write a story about a man who healed his cancer, but went mad, by using "carcinogen angels" or something like that to kill his cancer?Doug`noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-18094343585092511292015-04-19T14:00:10.573+01:002015-04-19T14:00:10.573+01:00Holy crap you pulled me in. And I love the illustr...Holy crap you pulled me in. And I love the illustrations! Great writing style, I want you to do more.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13800244766592594222noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-74499669584330925922015-04-16T17:13:19.493+01:002015-04-16T17:13:19.493+01:00Hi Micheal, I really enjoyed reading this as it to...Hi Micheal, I really enjoyed reading this as it took me out of one world into another. I liked the drawings as they tended to amply the whole situation.<br /><br />I must admit I was left wondering about our future world where new diseases and viruses develop out of apparently nowhere, followed by the never ending process of experimentation with new drugs. Will it ever end? Yes it's a war out there , indeed. Man against the biological world.<br />A great YA story and very well told/written.<br /><br />James.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-65516091085726719492015-04-15T19:28:58.153+01:002015-04-15T19:28:58.153+01:00Interesting idea. I enjoyed the story. I think i...Interesting idea. I enjoyed the story. I think it could have moved faster if the characters didn't have to explain so much to one another. Seemed like the "as you know, Bob" passages could have been cut back. Over-all, though, it created the kind of heroic feel this type of story needs. Nicely done. Gerald Warfieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11579249670806899145noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-73718945847202230682015-04-15T01:40:30.606+01:002015-04-15T01:40:30.606+01:00Great story - really sucks you in. I love the futu...Great story - really sucks you in. I love the future medical-ese. Always amazes me the breadth of imagination that takes. Well done!Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15518431138879518842noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-24404530093122497732015-04-14T18:21:45.905+01:002015-04-14T18:21:45.905+01:00I suppose an obvious question would be - could thi...I suppose an obvious question would be - could this progress to a graphic novel? The drawings are integral and finely drawn, and expand the dimensions of the text? The intricacies of the created world benefit hugely from the illustrations. A cogent story with a consistent ratioanale in a believable world. Thank you,<br />CeinwenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com