tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post4784017938282327648..comments2024-03-28T11:48:59.566+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Rattled by Ceinwen HaydonCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-43333581405076040422018-05-12T01:54:16.689+01:002018-05-12T01:54:16.689+01:00Glad I found this. You lift the reader with care i...Glad I found this. You lift the reader with care in your cupped hand, affecting mood and belief with ease. A pleasant journey, some invigorating flotsamming (;-), and then a gentle let down into the story's dark conclusion. Mitchell Toewshttp://bit.ly/ProseByToewsnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-26731805196856856372017-06-13T06:01:12.010+01:002017-06-13T06:01:12.010+01:00Thank you, Jane. I really appreciate your generous...Thank you, Jane. I really appreciate your generous comments,<br />Best wishes,<br />CeinwenAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11145727006327466838noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-66941309110961356272017-06-12T23:30:08.073+01:002017-06-12T23:30:08.073+01:00A most enjoyable telling Ceinwen of a woman's ...A most enjoyable telling Ceinwen of a woman's mental unravelling. At least she had some pleasure along the way! You have used fine imagery and powerful writing to take us on the journey with her. You haven't held back, so well done for this honest story. Jane SwanAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-42112450185264895472017-06-12T06:22:13.572+01:002017-06-12T06:22:13.572+01:00Thank you very much Bruce, for your kind feedback....Thank you very much Bruce, for your kind feedback. I am very pleased that you liked 'Rattled' so much, warm wishes, Ceinwen<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11145727006327466838noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-78529534791288067912017-06-11T21:14:34.385+01:002017-06-11T21:14:34.385+01:00A gripping, superbly written and courageous story ...A gripping, superbly written and courageous story with great insight into the human psyche. The best story I've read for a long time.Bruce Costellohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08192248044937185344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-4513118006842172972017-06-11T16:51:15.255+01:002017-06-11T16:51:15.255+01:00Thank you so much, Mike, Nancy and Brooke. I am de...Thank you so much, Mike, Nancy and Brooke. I am delighted that you enjoyed this story and humbled by your generous comments. Warm wishes,<br />CeinwenAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11145727006327466838noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-31061453843029316452017-06-11T15:48:05.005+01:002017-06-11T15:48:05.005+01:00Great story! My laughter at the final sentence was...Great story! My laughter at the final sentence was I believe an uncontrollable nervous response - the relief of the whole thing being wrapped up...though not entirely, the timing thing with the mobile messages is unsettling, but time doesn't travel in straight lines however strong a signal ones smartphone has! Gosh, I felt I was there at every thrust, heave, murmur, and the 'flapping of the duvet' is more than worthy of MR James! Sumptuous writing; 'lazy curlicues of sound,' and many others. I shall now go and 'let my psyche rip.'!<br />B r o o k e Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17142492723192523556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-90820820667622763382017-06-09T17:14:49.453+01:002017-06-09T17:14:49.453+01:00A remarkable story - so beautiful and well told, w...A remarkable story - so beautiful and well told, with sadness and truth so vivid. Thank you, Ceinwen.Nancy Lanenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-50397656015960511992017-06-09T15:03:12.002+01:002017-06-09T15:03:12.002+01:00a frank and totally credible tale of a woman´s bre...a frank and totally credible tale of a woman´s breakdown. some brilliant writing,`..sky fresh-washed and blue enough to clad many sailors with trousers` to give but one example. a story to make one think. Well done Ceinwen<br />Mike McCAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com