tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post5044353254613435084..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Half Moon Bay by Sara JacobelliCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-44684608162582359822015-06-03T11:12:21.693+01:002015-06-03T11:12:21.693+01:00Corrected.Corrected.Charlie Fishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-39754075961232784132015-05-26T22:50:17.728+01:002015-05-26T22:50:17.728+01:00Thank you! (oops, you're right about that ty...Thank you! (oops, you're right about that typo: It is Daly City!)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-29504991401587215712015-05-26T17:10:13.850+01:002015-05-26T17:10:13.850+01:00That's quite a ride -- and a couple of extreme...That's quite a ride -- and a couple of extremely memorable characters. Tiny typo (only noticed by Bay Area types) -- Daly City, not Daley City.Tony Acarasiddhi Presshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14808091702243409739noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-14794864721641017762015-05-23T06:56:20.393+01:002015-05-23T06:56:20.393+01:00...... and my comment should have read "to sh......... and my comment should have read "to show" - fingers, brains and keyboards - it's amazing anything ever comes out in its intended form! Thanks again for the story,<br />Ceinwen<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-86842246453084057242015-05-23T01:33:48.725+01:002015-05-23T01:33:48.725+01:00Sorry for the typo. "certainly"
Sara J...Sorry for the typo. "certainly" <br /><br />Sara JacobelliAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-2247082542307851762015-05-23T00:07:13.876+01:002015-05-23T00:07:13.876+01:00The actual Richard Brautigan quote is: "My te...The actual Richard Brautigan quote is: "My teachers could easily have ridden with Jesse James, for all the time they stole from me." <br /><br />The title of the poem is, "The Memoirs of Jesse James."<br /><br />http://www.math.buffalo.edu/~sww/poetry2/brautigan_richard.html<br /><br />Sofia misquotes the actual words, although she certailnly grasps the spirit of the poem.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-75047546987355922762015-05-23T00:00:16.993+01:002015-05-23T00:00:16.993+01:00Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. I felt the t...Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. I felt the tension even as I wrote it. <br /><br />Sara JacobelliAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-65188730439965166282015-05-22T12:19:06.688+01:002015-05-22T12:19:06.688+01:00The mounting fear and tension, laced with Sofia...The mounting fear and tension, laced with Sofia's longing for her children, compelled me to read this story. Sofia and Mick were well drawn and vivid,and I thought that Sofia's internal asides worked well show more of her world. A good read, thank you,<br />CeiwnenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com