tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post5381052831483960214..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Lilah by Robert Lowell RussellCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-64614846318143390022013-11-04T03:37:29.359+00:002013-11-04T03:37:29.359+00:00I'm glad you all liked the story. It's an ...I'm glad you all liked the story. It's an older piece and different from what I normally write, but I like how it turned out. RLRhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00768792355941196421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-68165722884062271162013-10-26T10:36:52.476+01:002013-10-26T10:36:52.476+01:00I like the way only little bits of information are...I like the way only little bits of information are revealed at a time. It gives the story more room for the beautiful imagery that you created, but also keeps the reader reading to want to find out more about your world. <br /><br />A part two would definitely be nice!<br /><br />Ziyad Hayatli Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-46854247113276576282013-10-25T18:31:42.253+01:002013-10-25T18:31:42.253+01:00Very mystical, and, like Michael, I enjoyed the im...Very mystical, and, like Michael, I enjoyed the imagery. I'm going to have to read it a few more times to put all the pieces together, though. ;-)Jim Bartletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03429957545169700110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-74465349930193391232013-10-25T11:12:22.961+01:002013-10-25T11:12:22.961+01:00i really liked this, the imagery and i wasn´t sure...i really liked this, the imagery and i wasn´t sure where it was going. <br />Michael McCarthyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com