tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post5665206829869285176..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Some Mighty Fine Wine by Phil TemplesCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-71237240853262896652013-05-11T17:30:22.605+01:002013-05-11T17:30:22.605+01:00I laughed out loud too! Cute!
A.D.NohrI laughed out loud too! Cute!<br />A.D.NohrAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-23197281033957471452012-11-18T08:17:39.719+00:002012-11-18T08:17:39.719+00:00nice. I laughed out loud. nice. I laughed out loud. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09778735075089954924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-70590250419002519452012-11-07T14:40:32.241+00:002012-11-07T14:40:32.241+00:00Sharp little story!Sharp little story!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-68771459359503302872012-11-01T00:00:06.328+00:002012-11-01T00:00:06.328+00:00Nice bit of whimsy. Insightful view of girl frien...Nice bit of whimsy. Insightful view of girl friend.Burt Baumnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-28529929400596160222012-10-09T14:08:44.729+01:002012-10-09T14:08:44.729+01:00I enjoyed the voice of the story very much, and th...I enjoyed the voice of the story very much, and the dialogue came across as very natural. I could have done with a bit more action and narrative but, then, that wasn't really the point. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com