tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post5669007070960483626..comments2024-03-29T12:58:34.121+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Courtship Contemplation Reaches Floral Conclusion by Mary SteerCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-5325602116341490032016-03-31T15:13:36.237+01:002016-03-31T15:13:36.237+01:00lovely flowery proselovely flowery proseAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-89089658107526419262016-02-25T18:36:31.251+00:002016-02-25T18:36:31.251+00:00Definitely short and cute. Very clever. :)Definitely short and cute. Very clever. :)priestradahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09317818134027011017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-86326548489476109332016-02-16T02:03:53.881+00:002016-02-16T02:03:53.881+00:00Thanks for all the great comments - so glad people...Thanks for all the great comments - so glad people have been enjoying my story.Mary Steernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-65360838985207786552016-02-15T16:03:33.368+00:002016-02-15T16:03:33.368+00:00Brilliant and wonderfully clever. Wish I had read ...Brilliant and wonderfully clever. Wish I had read this before sending a pack of beer :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-10549517898318718022016-02-14T17:02:26.115+00:002016-02-14T17:02:26.115+00:00I loved it. right to the point. Feelings without...I loved it. right to the point. Feelings without wordiness to lose them in. Very fun.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-2869537754492914502016-02-14T02:22:57.420+00:002016-02-14T02:22:57.420+00:00Wow - what a fun piece. It just trips along. The a...Wow - what a fun piece. It just trips along. The absence of articles and other function words gives the piece a real energy. Delightful!Brian Henryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16477347092587248351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-57922779219206715542016-02-13T14:30:51.667+00:002016-02-13T14:30:51.667+00:00Lots of flowers for you, Mary! All purple, to sign...Lots of flowers for you, Mary! All purple, to signify my admiration for the creativity and humour of this piece.maria mallozzinoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-7868575391897101122016-02-13T01:05:34.869+00:002016-02-13T01:05:34.869+00:00Erudite as usual, and only you would know the agap...Erudite as usual, and only you would know the agapanthus!<br />No need to get a new plan, Stan. You got this beat.Terry. Jeonju South Koreanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-44768497782477044612016-02-12T16:50:40.663+00:002016-02-12T16:50:40.663+00:00Gorgeous, poetic piece - lyrical prose at its best...Gorgeous, poetic piece - lyrical prose at its best. Love distilled - thank you,<br />CeinwenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-85096048511461576212016-02-12T16:43:14.469+00:002016-02-12T16:43:14.469+00:00Mary, thank you for a story that is brilliant, ent...Mary, thank you for a story that is brilliant, entertaining, wonderful, clever, engaging, playful, thoughtful, intriguing, and just plain lovely!Nancy Lanenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-12969071725014681542016-02-12T13:32:54.308+00:002016-02-12T13:32:54.308+00:00Brilliant and perfect for Valentines's Day.Brilliant and perfect for Valentines's Day.Rita Baileynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-36925684445779061072016-02-12T13:26:30.274+00:002016-02-12T13:26:30.274+00:00brilliant. thank you so much!brilliant. thank you so much!Stuart Pikehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18080449027543070108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-11306096674239143632016-02-12T13:16:32.271+00:002016-02-12T13:16:32.271+00:00a very clever idea and it certainly works, encoura...a very clever idea and it certainly works, encourages good use of vocabulary. think i´ve also succeeded but on smaller scale!<br />well done<br />Mike McCAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com