tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post5719070312136654319..comments2024-03-28T11:48:59.566+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: The Fourteen Fourteen Curse by William Quincy BelleCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-56368088873985849012016-10-12T01:33:39.905+01:002016-10-12T01:33:39.905+01:00Woo. This blew my mind and in some way turns me o...Woo. This blew my mind and in some way turns me on that you can write like this. I love it when time and space warp. I do lots of stories like this too, especially at Halloween. I write at Our Salon as zanelle.Zanellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17208666012076724059noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-85761047881548817942016-10-11T20:30:06.922+01:002016-10-11T20:30:06.922+01:00This was immensely fun. Really nicely written and ...This was immensely fun. Really nicely written and nicely paced too.Julie Carpenterhttp://www.sacredchickens.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-64821568798291820652016-10-11T16:44:56.508+01:002016-10-11T16:44:56.508+01:00(Unexpectedly) fun read. Poor Donald should have p...(Unexpectedly) fun read. Poor Donald should have paid heed to his own concerns and stepped away for a while. Keep 'um coming! JimAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-25687284990013995152016-10-11T14:32:02.509+01:002016-10-11T14:32:02.509+01:00Visual in a good way.Visual in a good way.Dougnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-73543663517506734252016-10-11T12:40:52.905+01:002016-10-11T12:40:52.905+01:00I truly enjoyed this story; the plot as well as th...I truly enjoyed this story; the plot as well as the clear, understated style.<br /><br />When I read, "As he shut the door, he felt a breeze against his cheek", I thought "Oh no!" <br /><br />Great ending, too.<br /><br />Just as a point of interest, if you have ever suffered derealism - a form of psychosis - this is how it feels!<br /><br />Thank you for writing this, William Quincy Belle!Louisa Campbellnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-24345726620379657492016-10-11T10:21:07.268+01:002016-10-11T10:21:07.268+01:00i imagine this was quite difficult to write! eithe...i imagine this was quite difficult to write! either way you have certainly succeeded. i really wanted to know what happened next. i´ve also been interested in time, in the sense of it moving at different speeds for different people!<br />anyway an excellent piece!<br /><br />Mike McCAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-35975104220487306342016-10-11T10:16:03.020+01:002016-10-11T10:16:03.020+01:00A well-told story dealing with a topic that intere...A well-told story dealing with a topic that interests many people. (What intrigues me is the possibility of parallel universes.) One wonders whether hundreds of years hence, human consciousness will have expanded to a point where some of the questions will have been answered. Keep writing!<br />Beryl. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-77356248785330557412016-10-11T08:52:54.728+01:002016-10-11T08:52:54.728+01:00Fabulous writing... I was completely drawn in and ...Fabulous writing... I was completely drawn in and felt the mounting disorientation and anxiety of the protagonist. Well done and many thanks, <br />Ceinwen Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11145727006327466838noreply@blogger.com