tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post6301863075432874744..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Frozen Packages by PathosCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-17847225251121074222014-11-17T03:58:27.528+00:002014-11-17T03:58:27.528+00:00I Love, Love, Love this story. I was hooked from t...I Love, Love, Love this story. I was hooked from the very begging until the very end.<br />Who hasn't wondered what's really lurking in the everyday places we all know? This story captures what we are quietly wondering...but might never say out loud...Hat's off to the author, Spectacular!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-36510018284049382242014-04-21T01:47:48.441+01:002014-04-21T01:47:48.441+01:00I particularly enjoyed the minor conflicts and mys...I particularly enjoyed the minor conflicts and mysteries leading to the discovery of the packages.Dannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-60914153120241188562014-04-09T12:51:47.337+01:002014-04-09T12:51:47.337+01:00This was a good time. Nice balance of action, humo...This was a good time. Nice balance of action, humor, and squick factor. <br /><br />--Wendy HammerAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-76052892822903945542014-04-08T06:38:40.418+01:002014-04-08T06:38:40.418+01:00What a disturbingly fun story! I don't usually...What a disturbingly fun story! I don't usually read horror or science fiction on purpose, but this was well written and engaged me to the end. My favorite image/line is "The overcast skies shielded the stars and moon from penetrating the gloom" NICE!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-91649370029074752702014-04-06T16:08:51.625+01:002014-04-06T16:08:51.625+01:00Tasty worms!! Wow - just the right touch of tensio...Tasty worms!! Wow - just the right touch of tension, a good sprinkling of characters brought to life with great writing, and a dash of humor. Very well done! Fun story!Jim Bartletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03429957545169700110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-69546339248412715572014-04-06T12:12:09.626+01:002014-04-06T12:12:09.626+01:00this really is excellent, great characters, especi...this really is excellent, great characters, especially Ronnie, who I just knew had an awful fate in store. original Story, mad. I loved it!<br /><br />Michael McCarthyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com