tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post6384684510603505215..comments2024-03-28T11:43:49.904+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: The Afternoon Express by Kate FranklinCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-57370129216566025562023-05-28T12:49:37.774+01:002023-05-28T12:49:37.774+01:00Patricia Crandall – above – pegged it: it was Hitc...Patricia Crandall – above – pegged it: it was Hitchcockian. Good tension; indeed it was a gem. Good work! I’d like to see more of your work.Bill Topenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-78406531137540715042015-10-05T01:41:58.334+01:002015-10-05T01:41:58.334+01:00This story had me holding my breath to the end. Th...This story had me holding my breath to the end. The ending was totally unexpected. It reminded me of Hitchcock. Patricia CrandallAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-40527005982530437752015-09-09T04:27:47.238+01:002015-09-09T04:27:47.238+01:00I love this. Great ending. I love this. Great ending. Dana M.https://www.blogger.com/profile/05030323754922039903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-28375778415298738822015-08-31T18:40:21.208+01:002015-08-31T18:40:21.208+01:00I really enjoyed the light tension through this, w...I really enjoyed the light tension through this, with the absurd ending that made me feel like I had been hit with a truck. The length served your story well, too! If it was any longer, I don't know if the drama of the final moment would have worked so well.Hong Nguyen-Searshttp://hongnguyensears.weebly.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-12388581827333136092015-08-25T22:33:42.147+01:002015-08-25T22:33:42.147+01:00Loved it. Great suspense! Loved it. Great suspense! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15351896159058558890noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-29761739307595825592015-08-23T15:05:51.450+01:002015-08-23T15:05:51.450+01:00Well written and held the reader's interest fr...Well written and held the reader's interest from first word to last. Just when we thought we could relax... the axe fell! Do as you would be done by??<br />Thank you.<br />Beryl.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-45683640947218410652015-08-21T15:42:58.097+01:002015-08-21T15:42:58.097+01:00very nicely done, just when you think you´ve crack...very nicely done, just when you think you´ve cracked it......<br /><br />Well done<br /><br />Mike McCAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-56834657052406068102015-08-21T11:42:13.256+01:002015-08-21T11:42:13.256+01:00A tightly constructed gem of a story - finished of...A tightly constructed gem of a story - finished off with a serving of well calibrated rough justice. Well done,<br />Many thanks,<br />CeinwenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com