tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post6566132916706041834..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Tiny Dancer and the Roadmaster by Renata ScruggsCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-16085565434329063312015-09-23T09:00:10.095+01:002015-09-23T09:00:10.095+01:00very nice style of writing and a very good story, ...very nice style of writing and a very good story, brought the location alive and i was very surprised by the ending.<br />well done<br /><br />Mike McCAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-19382392118890659472015-09-22T21:51:13.670+01:002015-09-22T21:51:13.670+01:00Editor: corrected!Editor: corrected!Charlie Fishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-671799038348591862015-09-22T19:02:33.487+01:002015-09-22T19:02:33.487+01:00I wondered about that - but I thought that it migh...I wondered about that - but I thought that it might have been deliberate?<br />In any event a great story!<br />CeinwenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-89614282945401096452015-09-22T15:33:07.421+01:002015-09-22T15:33:07.421+01:00that's a mistake. It should be Elton. Not su...that's a mistake. It should be Elton. Not sure if it's in the original (probably is) I need to fix that. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15351896159058558890noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-38326450373532921862015-09-22T02:02:36.923+01:002015-09-22T02:02:36.923+01:00Maybe I'm supposed to be confused. Towards th...Maybe I'm supposed to be confused. Towards the end Max is talking to Elton (Tiny Dancer was one of the early good ones - not much lately) and responds to Robbie. I'm happy to know that Stephen King isn't the only one writing haunted car stories.<br /><br />Good sense of place.Dougnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-37116568808118263192015-09-21T13:23:01.891+01:002015-09-21T13:23:01.891+01:00Thank you for that insightful comment! Thank you for that insightful comment! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15351896159058558890noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-6126457766984968142015-09-21T11:02:21.794+01:002015-09-21T11:02:21.794+01:00A well written story that disorientates the reader...A well written story that disorientates the reader with skill. The seguing between past and present is powerful and the characterisations are vivid and compelling. It was great that Maxine, although she'd been a teenaged single mother, (and possibly abused by her father), had wrought a good life for her and her child - running in the face of stereotypes that dictate that such a woman should be a failure living on the breadline. Thank you,<br />CeinwenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com