tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post6967965042490981294..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: R.I.P. by Robert LambCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-8757645328975447782016-01-16T19:13:06.187+00:002016-01-16T19:13:06.187+00:00A delightful story. The 10 year old's pov make...A delightful story. The 10 year old's pov makes it all the more touching. Reminds me of the work of Clyde Edgerton.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01289956121343192828noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-73789847751834984802015-12-19T11:05:10.249+00:002015-12-19T11:05:10.249+00:00i thoroughly enjoyed this, what beautiful use of l...i thoroughly enjoyed this, what beautiful use of language<br />and a fabulous story, really brought this time to life<br />Mike McCAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-63611275319500808932015-12-18T21:54:11.214+00:002015-12-18T21:54:11.214+00:00A most interesting story and well told. The analog...A most interesting story and well told. The analogies and descriptions (e.g., falling back like wheat in a high wind,still smelled of freshly sawn planks) provided vivid details. This is really good.Nancy Lanenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-56595640166876245052015-12-18T21:07:52.234+00:002015-12-18T21:07:52.234+00:00Don't jump the gun - things are not always wha...Don't jump the gun - things are not always what they seem! A pacey well told story, many thanks, CeinwenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com