tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post7027295727356935058..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Innocent Lust by Ethan RegalCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-45470415764633181162017-02-04T03:06:21.934+00:002017-02-04T03:06:21.934+00:00Elizabeth was so well written. I could see and hea...Elizabeth was so well written. I could see and hear her perfectly. It was un-pleasant to hear that she wished her uncle was there but I suspect that many abused children have those feelings for their abusers. Well done. I felt sick to my stomach like the poor protagonist. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15086979954520462322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-82503402251156416622016-03-09T03:39:01.618+00:002016-03-09T03:39:01.618+00:00You moved me skillfully through this little girls ...You moved me skillfully through this little girls sexual experience and how a secret like this could remain a secret. It's also interesting how being sexually abused can be pleasurable for the victim as well as the victim identifying with the abuser and perpetrating the cycle of abuse. Clever and informative. Interesting topic.YogiWriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03343498929969278470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-39961029321382057392016-01-14T17:29:43.014+00:002016-01-14T17:29:43.014+00:00An uncomfortable read. Perhaps more so for being w...An uncomfortable read. Perhaps more so for being written in the first person. I reckon many people have such things locked away in their memory. Thanks for sharing!<br />S.LucasAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-11770502420184601912014-08-26T08:35:40.510+01:002014-08-26T08:35:40.510+01:00Thanks a lot for your kind comments, please check ...Thanks a lot for your kind comments, please check out http://www.worldcitystories.com/index.php/africa/nigeria/lagos/135-two-strangers Ethan Regalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14064777162768802306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-75272426836642508192014-06-29T10:06:58.633+01:002014-06-29T10:06:58.633+01:00Its well written but reading it left me with a ver...Its well written but reading it left me with a very uneasy feeling. But maybe that was the goal of the story..Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16287669030658519839noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-1667980492242559752014-06-21T20:12:00.763+01:002014-06-21T20:12:00.763+01:00Thanks for your comment. Just had to get the story...Thanks for your comment. Just had to get the story out there. Your first comment is a bit hilarious considering it was a mistake. But you must appreciate this subject based on your short story about that dude that exploits orphans. Loads of kids get abused and it's so depressing.Ethan Regalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14064777162768802306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-74399612453426485632014-06-21T11:05:07.561+01:002014-06-21T11:05:07.561+01:00sorry, a minor blackout just occurred, should read...sorry, a minor blackout just occurred, should read: i REALLY like this, brilliantly descriptive, you got in the minds of These children<br />Michael McCarthyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-59030879238995215332014-06-21T11:01:32.432+01:002014-06-21T11:01:32.432+01:00i like this, the innocence of childhood and how e...i like this, the innocence of childhood and how easily it is exploited,<br /><br />Michael McCarthy Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com