tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post7120641466999328308..comments2024-03-19T07:16:47.153+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Neighbors by Eva SilverfineCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-37318178198706086252016-10-31T14:37:51.752+00:002016-10-31T14:37:51.752+00:00Nicely done - I didn't see that coming at all....Nicely done - I didn't see that coming at all. Would've liked to have seen the pendant get lost in the first place - but that would've made for a much longer story. I was anxious too when he began coming after her - what does he want?!Mary Steerhttp://marysteer.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-44087575836883629072016-10-03T21:19:15.611+01:002016-10-03T21:19:15.611+01:00Really got my heart pumping! Very good writing!Really got my heart pumping! Very good writing!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03016469973148000974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-86330045860939750202016-10-02T01:53:39.971+01:002016-10-02T01:53:39.971+01:00Very compelling! Suzy's confusion about Troy a...Very compelling! Suzy's confusion about Troy and how to handle the encounters was totally believable and the climax seemed inevitable.Jeffee Palmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08522964565179369926noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-76938756595593294432016-10-01T17:25:52.839+01:002016-10-01T17:25:52.839+01:00This is an excellent story. I'm fortunate to h...This is an excellent story. I'm fortunate to have read it.Tony Acarasiddhi Presshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14808091702243409739noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-14523251332203250992016-09-29T15:31:19.522+01:002016-09-29T15:31:19.522+01:00Sometimes the enemy is us. That was a very powerf...Sometimes the enemy is us. That was a very powerful story.Julie Carpenterhttp://www.sacredchickens.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-71806991705875736512016-09-29T07:28:25.005+01:002016-09-29T07:28:25.005+01:00Loved the evocative pace of this. Beautifully told...Loved the evocative pace of this. Beautifully told, thank you.Louisa Campbellnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-89820893287716347022016-09-28T00:58:39.978+01:002016-09-28T00:58:39.978+01:00A thank you to all who posted a comment. A thank you to all who posted a comment. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-43109247290231883432016-09-27T16:57:59.155+01:002016-09-27T16:57:59.155+01:00Great story! The pace and conclusion are superb. T...Great story! The pace and conclusion are superb. Thank you.Nancy Lanenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-3656076492397335502016-09-27T13:47:56.662+01:002016-09-27T13:47:56.662+01:00Unexpected ending.Unexpected ending.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-79129508637409826792016-09-27T11:36:19.963+01:002016-09-27T11:36:19.963+01:00To be able to convey so much in such a short story...To be able to convey so much in such a short story takes real talent. I loved your economy with words and how you used this brevity to contribute to the tense climax. Well done.<br />Beryl.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-42544198490997462862016-09-27T11:12:53.185+01:002016-09-27T11:12:53.185+01:00very good story, well written with strong characte...very good story, well written with strong characters, fine example of short story<br /><br />Mike McCAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-15277187928203585292016-09-27T09:18:58.423+01:002016-09-27T09:18:58.423+01:00Very powerful writing, very many thanks, Ceinwen Very powerful writing, very many thanks, Ceinwen Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11145727006327466838noreply@blogger.com