tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post7152721193668890706..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Not With a Bang But a Whimper by Brennan LombardiCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-59427188882368024582016-06-13T14:56:45.084+01:002016-06-13T14:56:45.084+01:00Very well constructed and story, about a very trou...Very well constructed and story, about a very troubled individual. A most enjoyable read. Thank you.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00123442894702084804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-58477556845916511952016-06-07T19:23:51.647+01:002016-06-07T19:23:51.647+01:00Really well written, kept my interest. Really well written, kept my interest. Brittney D. Herznoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-47454940877815963172016-06-05T16:50:30.841+01:002016-06-05T16:50:30.841+01:00I enjoyed the story. I enjoyed the story. Jenny Sturgillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01937432787952357908noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-50114537834844159502016-06-04T15:09:18.124+01:002016-06-04T15:09:18.124+01:00In a way it comes down to doing the right thing. E...In a way it comes down to doing the right thing. Even if that is the only thing or way out. Thought provoking and well constructed<br />Mike Mc<br /><br /><br /><br />' Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-29876073280896206932016-06-03T21:03:47.928+01:002016-06-03T21:03:47.928+01:00A well crafted reflection of pain and loss at the ...A well crafted reflection of pain and loss at the end of a long term relationship, that includes the collateral damage done to others. Very moving,<br />Thank you,<br />Ceinwen<br />CeinwenAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11145727006327466838noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-80158156889453595982016-06-03T16:08:39.051+01:002016-06-03T16:08:39.051+01:00A lot of unstated "if only's" - nice...A lot of unstated "if only's" - nicely done. Thank you.Nancy Lanenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-25327664067989839842016-06-03T15:43:34.714+01:002016-06-03T15:43:34.714+01:00TEarjerker and heartbreaker. Effective and believ...TEarjerker and heartbreaker. Effective and believable.Doughttps://sites.google.com/site/aberrantword/noreply@blogger.com