tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post7229290600036440208..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: V for Victor by Tom SheehanCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-89178941319538725012015-04-02T04:36:16.973+01:002015-04-02T04:36:16.973+01:00Body language and mannerisms would've been hel...Body language and mannerisms would've been helpful for a reader to develop a detailed mental image. <br />I liked the way you described an Italian family dinner.<br />there is almost a sense of modern fantasy, or a touch of the mysterious and unknown reaching into our lives.<br />Also, a very polished and professional prose style. Keep up the good work.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06944201855929407520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-40951146564143861122015-03-17T03:18:23.712+00:002015-03-17T03:18:23.712+00:00This epitomizes so much of our lives and literatur...This epitomizes so much of our lives and literature. We want to think that there are miracles and the inexplicable. Oddly enough it applies to both vampires and five year singing cycles.Doug Hawleynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-77978096274045299302015-03-15T08:57:43.285+00:002015-03-15T08:57:43.285+00:00An interesting idea, with a lot of potential. I fe...An interesting idea, with a lot of potential. I felt that I wanted to know a bit more about Victor, about his mannerisms, foibles, complexities and physical presence? The attention to detail - especially relating to food was rich and inviting. The end was poignant, but left an iota of room for hope?<br />Many thanks,<br />CeinwenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com