tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post7834153820815093267..comments2024-03-29T10:50:47.715+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Out of Work by Jack CoeyCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-72193369228722958662013-11-18T09:46:11.592+00:002013-11-18T09:46:11.592+00:00Out of Work has wonderful wordplay. Improv is my s...Out of Work has wonderful wordplay. Improv is my specialty. I love wordplay!Carol Nissensonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-9467421010773050192013-09-18T05:41:08.605+01:002013-09-18T05:41:08.605+01:00 Very clever idea. You broke the rules, but it al... Very clever idea. You broke the rules, but it all worked well. Congrats.marie colliganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11394025747507260800noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-64549623688441613142013-08-24T14:55:32.875+01:002013-08-24T14:55:32.875+01:00Clever idea. A couple of prose pros struggling.Clever idea. A couple of prose pros struggling.Paul H. Yarbroughhttp://www.paulhyarbrough.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-81529931219808890162013-08-23T19:44:34.522+01:002013-08-23T19:44:34.522+01:00Neat idea, fashions change, even in grammar.Neat idea, fashions change, even in grammar.Anne Goodwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04184575753612760952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-7283496585658304952013-08-23T17:55:01.358+01:002013-08-23T17:55:01.358+01:00A story an English professor's mother could lo...A story an English professor's mother could love. The adverbs and adjectives do seem to get all the work, don't they?Jim Bartletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03429957545169700110noreply@blogger.com