tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post7885033840914014532..comments2024-03-30T07:53:54.050+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Another Time by James MulhernCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-77090586945305935542016-01-16T14:00:17.730+00:002016-01-16T14:00:17.730+00:00We are all seeking for some truth. I love how the ...We are all seeking for some truth. I love how the protagonist in this story changes. We could all use a little more introspection in this loud and crazy world. The essential theme of this story is that all of us are put on earth to learn more about life and become better people. Loved it.<br /><br />DianaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-37636295715856805272016-01-08T20:22:52.934+00:002016-01-08T20:22:52.934+00:00Love the way a passive individual changes into som...Love the way a passive individual changes into someone who finally is able to stand up for himself.<br /><br />LisaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-29636427276433357422015-11-14T20:45:21.465+00:002015-11-14T20:45:21.465+00:00A great example of outstanding writing: great voic...A great example of outstanding writing: great voice, extraordinary attention to the small details of daily life, and to the attitudes to the students and the teachers who are trying to reach them. The story pulls you in and holds you until the end. I look forward to reading more of James' work.Jeromehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18158027665993709925noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-54736632190189146872015-11-13T12:19:22.576+00:002015-11-13T12:19:22.576+00:00Ceinwen: Thank you very much.Ceinwen: Thank you very much.James Mulhernhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08559126402048767570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-43961296125842304342015-11-13T10:33:47.371+00:002015-11-13T10:33:47.371+00:00An excellent and poignant narrative, the language ...An excellent and poignant narrative, the language is very well employed and creates a credible protagonist in an all too familiar situation - marital breakdown and a chaotic microcosmic world that mirrors a wider disordered macrocosm. Very well crafted; it has been a pleasure to read your two stories on FotW in the last week,<br />Many thanks,<br />CeinwenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com