tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post8030646989446954160..comments2024-03-28T11:48:59.566+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Retirement Plans by Mary J. BreenCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-75077461970890005012017-09-06T19:37:30.559+01:002017-09-06T19:37:30.559+01:00I like the way this story revealed its characters ...I like the way this story revealed its characters at the end. Unlikable and sinister. One criticism, I thought there was a lot of dialogue, not that there was anything wrong with the dialogue, but a bit more prose would make it a better story. Edward Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07490305499236322340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-48172855912229809582016-12-20T04:47:34.582+00:002016-12-20T04:47:34.582+00:00Such a great information really giving a priceless...Such a great information really giving a priceless opportunity to the students and they can perform the self evaluation.<a href="http://resumeplus.us" rel="nofollow">Resume writing service</a> of incredible quality should have key purposes of interest a proposition obliges while bring phenomenal.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00246711068375986950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-71180771436727058802016-11-05T15:10:31.988+00:002016-11-05T15:10:31.988+00:00This is a delightful short mystery story...and the...This is a delightful short mystery story...and the point of view switch kept it suspenseful. It would actually make a really nice mystery novel as well, the characters could be expanded and more fully illustrated and backgrounds and histories added.Julie Carpenterhttp://sacredchickens.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-67575687004849966282016-10-22T12:32:57.686+01:002016-10-22T12:32:57.686+01:00Murder, he wrote.Murder, he wrote.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01450884096660099852noreply@blogger.com