tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post8526214677582507303..comments2024-03-29T12:58:34.121+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Mr. Williams' School Bus by Nancy LaneCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-3121317398536683452016-02-08T15:24:11.308+00:002016-02-08T15:24:11.308+00:00I...I think I have something in my eye. Okay, both...I...I think I have something in my eye. Okay, both eyes. Dang!<br /> <br />nice story :o)<br />Mary SteerMary Steernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-20716570569449707582016-02-05T19:11:41.911+00:002016-02-05T19:11:41.911+00:00good story, well written, nice guys do come out on...good story, well written, nice guys do come out on top, sometimes. all the characters were believable and interacted perfectly.<br /><br />well done<br />Mike McCAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-30759594590899022262016-02-05T17:06:11.837+00:002016-02-05T17:06:11.837+00:00A powerful and salutary story told in a subtle and...A powerful and salutary story told in a subtle and effective manner. Many thanks,<br />CeinwenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-28357177694948639132016-02-05T16:18:08.794+00:002016-02-05T16:18:08.794+00:00Nancy,
What a wonderful story. The suspense of th...Nancy, <br />What a wonderful story. The suspense of the beginning, and Mr. Williams unknown transgression, leading into the heartfelt details of Wally's true nature, and how the children rose up to respond to it, captivated me. I also enjoyed Mrs. Rose, the teacher-on-the-sidelines, as the narrator. All-in-all, this was a wonderful piece of short fiction. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13105303244408581406noreply@blogger.com