tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post8684807809856707040..comments2024-03-29T10:50:47.715+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Tonight I Think of You, Frankie Greene by Alan John GerstleCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-70877933242811424372016-05-15T06:51:54.600+01:002016-05-15T06:51:54.600+01:00Wow. You remember Bruce Webber (Weber). I barely r...Wow. You remember Bruce Webber (Weber). I barely recall his posterior.AJGhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07718249742620982566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-24046362706096158182016-04-13T08:13:11.257+01:002016-04-13T08:13:11.257+01:00Hey Turnstyle, that be a pretty good story. I kept...Hey Turnstyle, that be a pretty good story. I kept expecting something else to happen, other than Frank committing suicide. You handled that expectation well, neither giving in to it nor just abjuring it. The end adds an interesting edge to the narrator. There''s something slightly amiss about this guy. The end suggests that he sees or senses Frankie, although his ass is dead. Interesting prism, your narrator. He''s the protagonist. The story is all about his frame of mind. But I already told you all this last time I saw you on the number 7. Remember? You recommended that acting class in the Village, the one taught by Greg Simpson and Bruce Webber. Sorry I never made it to the bagel shop.<br />George Yudicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13165308768672854771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-37923620489560993892016-02-22T00:07:08.090+00:002016-02-22T00:07:08.090+00:00Thanks for the feedback. I truly appreciate it.Thanks for the feedback. I truly appreciate it.AJGhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07718249742620982566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-28814957429584573432016-02-22T00:05:36.330+00:002016-02-22T00:05:36.330+00:00Thanks for the kind wordsThanks for the kind wordsAJGhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07718249742620982566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-10787121685687052032016-02-19T18:03:27.647+00:002016-02-19T18:03:27.647+00:00I can imagine the scene replicated many times over...I can imagine the scene replicated many times over, anywhere fame is chased - stark stage, cast of jaded hopefuls, reality intruding. Thank you for a well done story.Nancy Lanenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-41684289995119051272016-02-19T14:22:44.797+00:002016-02-19T14:22:44.797+00:00BelievableBelievableDoughttps://sites.google.com/site/aberrantword/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-37782629625855851042016-02-19T12:45:36.822+00:002016-02-19T12:45:36.822+00:00An engaging story, well paced with good characteri...An engaging story, well paced with good characterisations. The emotional landscape felt genuine and and coherent with no melodrama to dilute the impact. Thank you,<br />CeinwenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-14204088838437642562016-02-19T09:10:38.219+00:002016-02-19T09:10:38.219+00:00i really enjoyed this, it´s written in a very easy...i really enjoyed this, it´s written in a very easy going style that drayws you in, good, crisp dialogue, great characterisation. <br />well done<br /><br />Mike McCAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com