tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post8837976254997538770..comments2024-03-29T12:58:34.121+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Taming Your Inner Child By Devon TavernCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-6012392064715022112016-08-02T22:53:41.178+01:002016-08-02T22:53:41.178+01:00Thanks for all the great comments.Thanks for all the great comments.Devon Tavernhttp://devontavern.blogspot.com/p/published-works.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-38069164989276485742015-08-03T14:59:57.183+01:002015-08-03T14:59:57.183+01:00Love the twist at the end of the story. Rings tru...Love the twist at the end of the story. Rings true, says my imagionary friend Roberta. Stop it, Roberta, I'm talking now. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15351896159058558890noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-8072837743146483932015-07-02T02:51:33.572+01:002015-07-02T02:51:33.572+01:00I love the idea of the "imaginary friend"...I love the idea of the "imaginary friend" of a mentally disturbed guy actually being a friend. It's kind of different to think about the heartache of losing that friend. Brittney D. Herzhttp://inkontheshore.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-18097224255056379812015-06-22T11:07:09.957+01:002015-06-22T11:07:09.957+01:00This is a strongly written piece. Very emotive and...This is a strongly written piece. Very emotive and compelling. The plot is well handled, given the complexity of its character shift. michael keithhttp://www.michaelckeith.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-58568188744733796962015-06-22T06:24:49.787+01:002015-06-22T06:24:49.787+01:00Well done, to be sure.Well done, to be sure.Tony Acarasiddhi Presshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14808091702243409739noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-69003942245269517572015-06-21T11:51:25.931+01:002015-06-21T11:51:25.931+01:00An interesting story with an unexpected twist.An interesting story with an unexpected twist.Irenahttps://sites.google.com/site/ipscribblings/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-30009884352190586792015-06-21T11:32:06.603+01:002015-06-21T11:32:06.603+01:00a truly excellent story with an unexpected twist.m...a truly excellent story with an unexpected twist.moving and convincing<br />great read<br />well done<br /><br />Mike McCAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-14872998637091706372015-06-21T10:00:54.416+01:002015-06-21T10:00:54.416+01:00A thoughtful and original exploration of alienatio...A thoughtful and original exploration of alienation and distress. You communicated the overriding sense of disorientation very well, thank you,<br />CeinwenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com