tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post8959962816242242067..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: The Rat Catcher By Max DetranoCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-14695970877608587482014-09-05T23:18:09.980+01:002014-09-05T23:18:09.980+01:00Whoosh. Whoosh. Whoosh.
I loved Mary Jo, what a p...Whoosh. Whoosh. Whoosh. <br />I loved Mary Jo, what a power house. <br />Thanks for another great read.<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-10565029817694925152014-04-19T03:23:58.283+01:002014-04-19T03:23:58.283+01:00Many Thanks, Charles.Many Thanks, Charles.Max Detranohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01302765944390724648noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-14790896580126202492014-04-19T03:23:13.237+01:002014-04-19T03:23:13.237+01:00Now that you mention it. I hadn't thought of t...Now that you mention it. I hadn't thought of that.<br />Thanks Pamela.Max Detranohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01302765944390724648noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-54369640473483652672014-04-19T03:22:14.775+01:002014-04-19T03:22:14.775+01:00Hi Ethan,
What a great comment. Thanks.
MaxHi Ethan,<br />What a great comment. Thanks.<br />MaxMax Detranohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01302765944390724648noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-27721658011465753452014-04-15T21:22:20.288+01:002014-04-15T21:22:20.288+01:00This story made me smile, very well written. The d...This story made me smile, very well written. The description was perfect, I could visualize everything, and I love how Rudy went back to his place and saw the damage. Der Schlaffer is annoying but I love that cat. She never gives up, does she? Also, love that Mary Jo returned to see the mess, she must have thought to herself, "I was right when I said this cat would bring home trouble." Also, loved that she saved Der Schlaffer from the raccoon, that really made me happy. This is such an original story, and such a simple plot. Oh, and I freaked out a bit when the rat crawled up Rudy, my skin got a bit sensitive while I was reading that scene.<br /><br />Ethan RegalEthan Regalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14064777162768802306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-69890544007575369772014-04-13T02:15:02.171+01:002014-04-13T02:15:02.171+01:00Funny and full of great touches. I thought it was ...Funny and full of great touches. I thought it was a really great (and very funny) story. C. H. WiseAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06849145239252008386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-36446930964953277322014-04-13T00:37:53.245+01:002014-04-13T00:37:53.245+01:00A love story! A horror story! A transformation sto...A love story! A horror story! A transformation story! Love it!Pamelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05946308980206108558noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-65916802676068078372014-04-12T22:13:06.635+01:002014-04-12T22:13:06.635+01:00Thank you, Wendy. Your comment means a lot to me!Thank you, Wendy. Your comment means a lot to me!Max Detranohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01302765944390724648noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-221171354535091452014-04-12T22:12:13.970+01:002014-04-12T22:12:13.970+01:00Thanks, Michael. It was fun to write.Thanks, Michael. It was fun to write.Max Detranohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01302765944390724648noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-37742958531233762132014-04-12T15:53:07.089+01:002014-04-12T15:53:07.089+01:00That story just flew by. I thoroughly enjoyed it. ...That story just flew by. I thoroughly enjoyed it. The wealth of detail made it vivid, but never bogged down the action. And what action! Well done! (Love Der Schlaffer!). <br /><br />--Wendy HammerAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-56636600552895200852014-04-11T19:01:58.074+01:002014-04-11T19:01:58.074+01:00what a great Story, totally original. Brilliantly ...what a great Story, totally original. Brilliantly descriptive, loved the characters, und Der Schlaffer lived to hunt another day!<br /><br />Michael McCarthyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com