tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post948618966949945886..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Mailbox by Scott Archer JonesCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-60093495897945808452015-04-24T13:55:54.144+01:002015-04-24T13:55:54.144+01:00Great psychological story. The only thing I would ...Great psychological story. The only thing I would have liked more is if you got into his head directly and really gave us the internal dialogue instead of pulling back. But it flowed very well and had a great core.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13800244766592594222noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-56060414369587766402015-04-20T18:46:31.171+01:002015-04-20T18:46:31.171+01:00One wonders how close many of are to madness and w...One wonders how close many of are to madness and what kind of event would set it off. I think the protagonist would have gone around the bend later even if the break up had not happened.Dougnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-1356805300988387922015-04-18T17:52:16.766+01:002015-04-18T17:52:16.766+01:00A powerful exploration of thought disorder, and pa...A powerful exploration of thought disorder, and pathological jealousy. A dire reflection of the solipsistic perceptions of an abuser. Frighteningly realistic and well portrayed through a vivid and well observed writing style. Thank you,<br />Ceinwen Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com