tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post1438247562733237414..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Justus P. Goodbody by Michael HatcherCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-41957934688782309412021-12-11T14:11:09.264+00:002021-12-11T14:11:09.264+00:00Wow, that’s a pretty somber ending. Great story th...Wow, that’s a pretty somber ending. Great story though, Justus feels like someone I feel like every southern person knows! Also feel like I was really starting to visualize the characters and city! Any more stories like this? BrianWDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09372912492613935186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-37972737447947381172021-06-14T14:19:37.141+01:002021-06-14T14:19:37.141+01:00Thanks so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it!Thanks so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it!Michael Hatcherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13009070479168234368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-70520142526818712222021-06-11T13:21:20.830+01:002021-06-11T13:21:20.830+01:00Great characters with very well-defined mannerisms...Great characters with very well-defined mannerisms and motivations. Wonderful tension between the characters throughout the tale. Gritty and subtle, very enjoyable tale.Ron Schultehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05058258071909410778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-84351226103629264392021-06-07T01:32:01.384+01:002021-06-07T01:32:01.384+01:00I love that movie! Thanks for the compliment!I love that movie! Thanks for the compliment!Michael Hatcherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13009070479168234368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-38226708272491263182021-06-06T18:08:53.073+01:002021-06-06T18:08:53.073+01:00'it's just us' says Earline to her son...'it's just us' says Earline to her son, and that haunts Justus's life and future. Good dialogue, dialogue reminds me of the movie 'Sling Blade.' I hope Justus can assert his independence... maybe we'll see a sequel story here.Harrison Kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06747310376412907313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-91922834918730441212021-06-05T19:59:45.967+01:002021-06-05T19:59:45.967+01:00Thanks so much for the encouragement! This is one ...Thanks so much for the encouragement! This is one of about eight stories I plan to write about the people of Howling Gulch, Nebraska. Thanks again!Michael Hatcherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13009070479168234368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-25364402120939213672021-06-04T23:10:44.317+01:002021-06-04T23:10:44.317+01:00So well written that I felt like I was there. Woul...So well written that I felt like I was there. Would love to read more about these characters. Great story.BillyFhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03043022948595456327noreply@blogger.com