tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post1487173058444976959..comments2024-03-28T11:48:59.566+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: The Picnic by R A ConineCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-23189324288492681282013-06-02T08:08:30.308+01:002013-06-02T08:08:30.308+01:00I am huge fan of dystopias. I liked how you pulled...I am huge fan of dystopias. I liked how you pulled us in but would've liked a hint or two earlier. I like rereading and finding the clues.Judy Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08967393177829913372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-55983944943774059152013-05-11T16:17:00.980+01:002013-05-11T16:17:00.980+01:00I enjoyed the read. It flows well. Well done.
A.C....I enjoyed the read. It flows well. Well done.<br />A.C.NohrAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-73364625985216636842013-05-08T02:27:40.475+01:002013-05-08T02:27:40.475+01:00Great story! I read this one yesterday. The descri...Great story! I read this one yesterday. The descriptions were really something to behold. I'm a huge fan of descriptions and the ones in this story gave me a few ideas. The ending was left open ended however. Not that its a bad thing but it leaves you hanging...and hanging. Its not a fault of the writer, I'm just not a fan. Thanks.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-68581841540998954872013-05-04T05:31:01.655+01:002013-05-04T05:31:01.655+01:00Didn't see that coming. Love the ending, we d...Didn't see that coming. Love the ending, we don't really know if they'll make it but it's love that will carry them through. Nicely done.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02708119926194520852noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-64578839045048048332013-05-03T23:36:20.630+01:002013-05-03T23:36:20.630+01:00What joint? What???What joint? What???Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-82272026270941658122013-05-03T16:25:47.563+01:002013-05-03T16:25:47.563+01:00I just wish the joint was open. Nice ride though.I just wish the joint was open. Nice ride though.Sibbett's Worldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15133270500292240681noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-75223090049909554702013-05-03T06:08:35.366+01:002013-05-03T06:08:35.366+01:00I love this story. Like the others, I didn't k...I love this story. Like the others, I didn't know what would happen. It was a lovely ride and I just enjoyed being with them. I admit I like it when love wins out. I cried a little at the end. It was so beautiful and tender and sweet.<br /><br />Frances Francis Jennenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-69552058331728035492013-04-28T16:46:38.831+01:002013-04-28T16:46:38.831+01:00Have to agree with Michael - you just get drawn in...Have to agree with Michael - you just get drawn in without even knowing it. I like being taken along, knowing something is coming, but not the slightest clue as to what.<br /><br />JimJim Bartletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03429957545169700110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-31966203390688386982013-04-28T15:17:20.472+01:002013-04-28T15:17:20.472+01:00this story lulls you in, brilliantly descriptive,
...this story lulls you in, brilliantly descriptive,<br />i really wasn´t sure what was coming,very effective.<br />well done<br /><br />michael mccarthyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com