tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post1591091832489371233..comments2024-03-19T07:16:47.153+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Peter Crown by The Wynn BrothersCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-23629508048340963682015-06-15T14:46:30.881+01:002015-06-15T14:46:30.881+01:00Great twist of diabolic intentions. Devil will sur...Great twist of diabolic intentions. Devil will surely be disappointed. An interesting read.Irena Pasvinterhttps://sites.google.com/site/ipscribblings/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-74605592228214216972015-01-17T17:58:47.417+00:002015-01-17T17:58:47.417+00:00Vatsal,
Thank you. We really appreciate it. Vatsal,<br /><br />Thank you. We really appreciate it. The Wynn Brothershttp://wynnbrothers.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-88430160172816578882015-01-17T17:56:21.190+00:002015-01-17T17:56:21.190+00:00Kyle,
Thanks for the kind words.Kyle,<br /><br />Thanks for the kind words.The Wynn Brothershttp://wynnbrothers.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-5537757071353977312015-01-17T17:54:51.602+00:002015-01-17T17:54:51.602+00:00"Be yourself a reliable friend," we like..."Be yourself a reliable friend," we like that. Well said.The Wynn Brothershttp://wynnbrothers.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-62529048497195203092015-01-17T12:56:01.963+00:002015-01-17T12:56:01.963+00:00Superb. Very Inspiring...
Vatsal Shah.Superb. Very Inspiring...<br /><br />Vatsal Shah.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-67729421084519176932015-01-13T15:19:49.780+00:002015-01-13T15:19:49.780+00:00An excellent piece of flash fiction. The ending is...An excellent piece of flash fiction. The ending is unexpected and quite beautiful. Thanks for writing it, guys!Kyle A. Massanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-8928926877687305622015-01-11T08:15:26.070+00:002015-01-11T08:15:26.070+00:00So cute.
Be yourself a reliable friend!So cute.<br />Be yourself a reliable friend!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-38226692940520082682015-01-09T00:41:00.711+00:002015-01-09T00:41:00.711+00:00Thanks to everyone for the comments. Thanks to everyone for the comments. The Wynn Brothershttp://www.wynnbrothers.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-949257590988834912015-01-09T00:25:41.811+00:002015-01-09T00:25:41.811+00:00Ceinwen,
Thanks for the kind words. We're gl...Ceinwen, <br /><br />Thanks for the kind words. We're glad you enjoyed it. And yes, there are two of us (Todd and Tim) :-)The Wynn Brothershttp://www.wynnbrothers.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-36372273217122180512015-01-08T23:12:48.902+00:002015-01-08T23:12:48.902+00:00This is a wonderful story, Wynn. Thank you very mu...This is a wonderful story, Wynn. Thank you very much for sharing it with us :-)Sam Kandejhttp://samk.irnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-3310084199630601832015-01-07T10:23:33.932+00:002015-01-07T10:23:33.932+00:00The uplifting ending restores all faith in the uns...The uplifting ending restores all faith in the unselfishness of human nature.<br />A good read. James McEwan.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-82308976944731457652015-01-06T16:35:21.478+00:002015-01-06T16:35:21.478+00:00This was suberb. Fun, yet a nice reminder of that ...This was suberb. Fun, yet a nice reminder of that which is most important. Jim Bartletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03429957545169700110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-73687095327995841452015-01-06T13:25:03.481+00:002015-01-06T13:25:03.481+00:00this really is first class, a parable which concer...this really is first class, a parable which concerns the truly important <br />thing(s) in life.<br />I agree the rhyming verse really adds to the Piece<br /><br />Mike McCarthyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-62227941435043201312015-01-06T12:20:36.430+00:002015-01-06T12:20:36.430+00:00Peter's faith is so great...'...tell him t...Peter's faith is so great...'...tell him this is number seven...' that the outcome in earthly terms is irrelevant. A lovely concept.<br />The rhyming verse of the letter gives the piece the power of a fable, and what a great image; the two friends fighting fire together!<br />Brooke Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17142492723192523556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-85932226062048921362015-01-06T09:18:42.304+00:002015-01-06T09:18:42.304+00:00This is micro fiction at its absolute best. I beca...This is micro fiction at its absolute best. I became well engaged from the beginning, by the end I was overcome. You (both?) have fantastic skill - please keep writing,<br />Well done,<br />CeinwenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com