tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post1839546162695935961..comments2024-03-29T10:50:47.715+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: The Magic Mirror by Ray J RobbioCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-7353630518271832032014-01-06T00:39:02.326+00:002014-01-06T00:39:02.326+00:00The details in this story are wonderful! The details in this story are wonderful! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-53344975485458704772014-01-06T00:34:27.329+00:002014-01-06T00:34:27.329+00:00This comment has been removed by the author.6thNuthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09071676000773172413noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-30439314428781943342013-11-18T09:42:02.113+00:002013-11-18T09:42:02.113+00:00I was especially drawn to The Magic Mirror…I’m a n...I was especially drawn to The Magic Mirror…I’m a native Chicagoan and spent many hours in the Field Museum. The story totally creeped me out, and I don’t know if I can read more of his stuff. That’s a compliment, by the way.Carol Nissensonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-26006776006193575622013-11-17T05:23:41.998+00:002013-11-17T05:23:41.998+00:00Ray J. Robbio set up the problem and maintained th...Ray J. Robbio set up the problem and maintained the tension throughout. The personal goals of each of the characters are clear and drive the course of the story. Definitely a surprise ending. Good job!<br /><br />Cliff ...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-5451120445981303992013-10-30T01:23:01.930+00:002013-10-30T01:23:01.930+00:00TY! :)TY! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-37725707686473421752013-10-29T18:19:52.316+00:002013-10-29T18:19:52.316+00:00I liked the mystery you set up at the very beginni...I liked the mystery you set up at the very beginning and then wonderfully delivered on.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02708119926194520852noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-21727152557149742892013-10-28T22:17:37.541+00:002013-10-28T22:17:37.541+00:00so creepy!!so creepy!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-57105376139916670252013-10-27T16:56:55.625+00:002013-10-27T16:56:55.625+00:00What a chilling story! The ending was so spooky an...What a chilling story! The ending was so spooky and unexpected! Excellent job Ray J.Robbio!!Mandy Fnoreply@blogger.com