tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post1867897431446480935..comments2024-03-28T11:48:59.566+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Crow Barn by DC DiamondopolousCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-72204941203380686912019-02-21T15:49:15.281+00:002019-02-21T15:49:15.281+00:00As mentioned in the story it was used to keep the ...As mentioned in the story it was used to keep the sisters together. DC Diamondopoloushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17846407771745673951noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-27392445556734343892019-02-20T14:13:39.681+00:002019-02-20T14:13:39.681+00:00Well described although I don't know why a rop...Well described although I don't know why a rope was necessary on a trail that was a road.JohnDavidHannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16732376754848659738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-21605450147491038952019-02-18T23:07:23.905+00:002019-02-18T23:07:23.905+00:00Love the story. DC’s characters are alive as is th...Love the story. DC’s characters are alive as is their world. Powerful ending. Would love to read more by this author. Thanks for publishing.<br /><br />Regards,<br /><br />WBWBnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-38137917585377114332019-02-18T20:51:19.331+00:002019-02-18T20:51:19.331+00:00Very good world-building with vivid imagery and fr...Very good world-building with vivid imagery and fresh use of language. It’s the kind of story where I don’t know exactly what’s going on, but I think that’s somewhat the point. In any case, I like it. David Hensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13683380054995884030noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-76794438046581010232019-02-18T14:29:09.491+00:002019-02-18T14:29:09.491+00:00Very imaginative..... reminds me of dystopian book...Very imaginative..... reminds me of dystopian books like "The Road" Some lyrical prose. The characters are vivid as are their surroundings, a believable world. I wish all of us could have such a heavenly ending. The California dream coming from the California nightmare.Harris Onnoreply@blogger.com