tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post1904882795286075532..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Endoganes by Jack LawrenceCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-50263378013851689112022-07-01T21:02:48.075+01:002022-07-01T21:02:48.075+01:00Thank you Kyle for saying such nice things about m...Thank you Kyle for saying such nice things about my story. Sorry for the delay in replying. I'm glad you liked it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-4871824033850956072014-11-17T04:07:45.517+00:002014-11-17T04:07:45.517+00:00This a beautiful story. Pure poetry...the first pa...This a beautiful story. Pure poetry...the first paragraph alone is magnificent. how wondrous to paint your story with classical elements...very pleasing to the soul, like a fine cup of Greek coffee,<br />followed by a shot of ouzo! Thank you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-28251984849282819682013-01-04T00:58:56.675+00:002013-01-04T00:58:56.675+00:00I loved the beginning, it really drew me in and it...I loved the beginning, it really drew me in and it sounded like a classical Greek myth. Was it inspired from one? Loved this! <br /><br />Ziyad Hayatli Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-62674047885735827512013-01-03T09:54:23.203+00:002013-01-03T09:54:23.203+00:00does he revive by some miracle?! eg: in the far fl...does he revive by some miracle?! eg: in the far flung future, aphrodite has a tiff with one of her sisters who brings him back as a symbol of revenge? then we can see him played by arnold schwarzenegger in a movie set in a futuristic dystopia where he brings his wrath to rain upon the innocent lovers who hide from a dictatorship which grows foetuses 'matrix' stylee and forbids all human coupling?<br />i really liked it jack- well done and happy 2013! hope it brings with it lots of inspiration...and perhaps a publisher :)<br />x Una<br />we want MORE!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-16150963615796947702012-12-30T02:07:32.467+00:002012-12-30T02:07:32.467+00:00I love how this story weaves storytelling with myt...I love how this story weaves storytelling with myth. Love how Aphrodite is woven into this. Nice job.Kylehttp://upatberggasse19.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.com