tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post2038260424819260408..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Tiny Beatles in My Head by Gary IvesCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-88946245572240859472015-04-30T15:48:39.483+01:002015-04-30T15:48:39.483+01:00The relatively happy ending surprised me after mos...The relatively happy ending surprised me after most of the story being about lives of quite desperation or worse.Doug`noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-13746807010713474302015-04-24T14:12:23.985+01:002015-04-24T14:12:23.985+01:00I loved the idea for the story and the execution w...I loved the idea for the story and the execution was good, but I felt somewhat cheated when you glossed over Him and Claire learning to live together and having to deal with adjusting to a new lifestyle. This could easily be extended to a novella if not a novel.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13800244766592594222noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-84535008364870995162015-04-23T18:28:45.458+01:002015-04-23T18:28:45.458+01:00This is a good read. I enjoyed it. I liked that yo...This is a good read. I enjoyed it. I liked that you kept Shelly and Claire's relationship real. It's hard to go from not having been raised by a father to calling him daddy all of a sudden. Thank you. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-51222516629184910092015-04-21T18:47:52.142+01:002015-04-21T18:47:52.142+01:00A moving story sensitively told - even if it did b...A moving story sensitively told - even if it did breach the bounds of belief at times. Profound and poetic insights into the human condition surfaced. A very good read, thankyou,<br />CeinwenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com