tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post2204846975007021749..comments2024-03-29T10:50:47.715+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Persian Carpet by Ricky GinsburgCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-2843619451118785112013-07-21T16:13:37.801+01:002013-07-21T16:13:37.801+01:00Poor Tingo - always a day late and a dollar short....Poor Tingo - always a day late and a dollar short. I think this could have been stretched out a little more; Tingo has some good potential for future adventures. Even within this story some of the summarizations could have been played out in dialogue. Kept me smilin' though!Jim Bartletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03429957545169700110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-67677328152333494442013-07-21T10:41:09.850+01:002013-07-21T10:41:09.850+01:00very good main character, i´m sure you could creat...very good main character, i´m sure you could create something interesting with him.<br />good Story and nice not over played humour.<br /><br />Michael mccarthyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com