tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post226096047409108563..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: The New Neighbor by David LanvertCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-79109955724118454672021-10-08T05:47:48.595+01:002021-10-08T05:47:48.595+01:00The story drew me in to Appalachin life in the thi...The story drew me in to Appalachin life in the thirties and the protagonist trying to leave his childhood behind. There are the unanswered questions .... the story weaves its way into my mind with its mood capturing the place and time, and a sense of mystery. Dad is a pretty spooky guy.Harrison Kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06747310376412907313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-11786678565002647642021-10-07T20:38:25.403+01:002021-10-07T20:38:25.403+01:00Thanks Rosemary for reading and for your comments!...Thanks Rosemary for reading and for your comments!David Lanverthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02047128645776257464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-29996914803922006102021-10-07T20:37:50.720+01:002021-10-07T20:37:50.720+01:00Thank you for reading and for commenting!Thank you for reading and for commenting!David Lanverthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02047128645776257464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-77141226591472373702021-10-04T18:30:00.485+01:002021-10-04T18:30:00.485+01:00Definitely a rollercoaster of a read. A very huma...Definitely a rollercoaster of a read. A very human story. Phil was so screwed up inside that he couldn't grasp the fact that he hadn't done anything wrong. <br />Unexpected twist midway through. <br />Well-drawn and distinctive characters.Rosemary Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05797123703252258773noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-26968796574103078542021-10-02T00:47:39.689+01:002021-10-02T00:47:39.689+01:00The story used a good metaphor of a roller coaster...The story used a good metaphor of a roller coaster ride, and that's what the story felt like with all of Phil's nervous energy and with all the rises and falls of expectations. Fast paced, turbulent fun. Edward Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07490305499236322340noreply@blogger.com