tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post2393777400598975956..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: All Mixed Up by Elizabeth ArcherCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-13971902431582517112014-10-07T20:05:55.813+01:002014-10-07T20:05:55.813+01:00It's a funny story - I read it twice and laugh...It's a funny story - I read it twice and laughed out loud at the same spots. I especially like the touches of bathos, like the Death Ghoul meeting its end in the cleaning fluid, and the voice at the end commenting on the situation. Good stuff.<br /><br />- Steve HaddonAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-15494225704400743582014-09-24T23:08:45.605+01:002014-09-24T23:08:45.605+01:00Ah, good--Charlie gets his comeuppance! I was hopi...Ah, good--Charlie gets his comeuppance! I was hoping Adrianna would be able to escape the Death Ghouls; it didn't seem fair that she'd be the one to suffer. The first Death Ghoul's encounter with the multi-purpose cleaner made me chuckle. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-40357911917455219022014-09-11T11:54:13.389+01:002014-09-11T11:54:13.389+01:00Darkly funny and melodramatic. I can relate! Thank...Darkly funny and melodramatic. I can relate! Thanks for the read! <br /><br />Charlotte Hayden Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-50342821744908155242014-08-29T19:06:04.531+01:002014-08-29T19:06:04.531+01:00Clever, entertaining story. I suppose you realize ...Clever, entertaining story. I suppose you realize it's your fault I'm craving margaritas! (Nice job!)<br /><br />Oscar DavisAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-55596779494992023192014-08-21T04:56:05.238+01:002014-08-21T04:56:05.238+01:00Enjoyed the story!!!
Enjoyed the story!!!<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-47428705276010259292014-08-20T13:18:30.850+01:002014-08-20T13:18:30.850+01:00I enjoyed reading this. Thanks! :-)I enjoyed reading this. Thanks! :-)Sam Kandejhttp://kandej.irnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-1145841891333353272014-08-19T18:49:31.124+01:002014-08-19T18:49:31.124+01:00Human spirits do lurk in some unexpected places. I...Human spirits do lurk in some unexpected places. I laughed, and you know I had to go and look up what a 'roofie' was!<br /><br />Brooke FieldhouseAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-3454848453059001192014-08-19T15:40:39.555+01:002014-08-19T15:40:39.555+01:00Smile ;-)Smile ;-)Jim Bartletthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03429957545169700110noreply@blogger.com