tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post2537322562809352..comments2024-03-28T08:17:06.703+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Sometimes If You're Lucky by Sharon Frame GayCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-36567230576162841732018-06-19T15:28:33.842+01:002018-06-19T15:28:33.842+01:00Dear Brooke, Rachel and Edward,
Thank you for taki...Dear Brooke, Rachel and Edward,<br />Thank you for taking the time to read my story. I am thrilled with your lovely comments!sharon frame gayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01493010889838149043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-34712326999254110922018-06-18T22:16:49.401+01:002018-06-18T22:16:49.401+01:00As did modestgodess, I loved the poetic simile: &q...As did modestgodess, I loved the poetic simile: "It felt so odd to be upright, as though a leaf had fallen off a tree, then tipped on to its points like a ballerina and danced across the forest floor."Edward Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07490305499236322340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-78127304465071112042018-06-18T05:16:24.460+01:002018-06-18T05:16:24.460+01:00Excellent, engaging read. You demonstrate how eve...Excellent, engaging read. You demonstrate how even those with the most monotonous existences still have thoughts and memories that are worth hearing.<br />Rachelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13890560087510659101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-82048749971375234182018-06-16T12:17:41.301+01:002018-06-16T12:17:41.301+01:00I was stimulated by the paradox of that which migh...I was stimulated by the paradox of that which might imprison us also being seen as an indispensable and only form of comfort. The word 'hostage' is used, and it's a recognized phenomenon that those who are taken hostage become dependent on their jailer to the extent that often they fear the moment of release more than their 'state of imprisonment'.<br />B r o o k e Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17142492723192523556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-45209824242763607982018-06-15T23:15:04.450+01:002018-06-15T23:15:04.450+01:00Thank you all for your kind words. Whenever I feel...Thank you all for your kind words. Whenever I feel down, I try to remind myself of those who, day after day, fight the good fight with disability. Health is a gift. sharon frame gayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01493010889838149043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-47730153282639863622018-06-15T22:34:18.171+01:002018-06-15T22:34:18.171+01:00Beautiful language. So rich in feelings, sad but h...Beautiful language. So rich in feelings, sad but hopeful. What a great story, Sharon!Nancy Lanenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-76355155376567625512018-06-15T22:18:43.385+01:002018-06-15T22:18:43.385+01:00So many stunning descriptions here - the stars &qu...So many stunning descriptions here - the stars "like flinty chips piercing the night sky"....the leaf like a ballerina - just two that captivated me.modestgoddesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14825561220511243134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-64024064377109073702018-06-15T14:46:13.562+01:002018-06-15T14:46:13.562+01:00A moving story of strength, resilience and loss. V...A moving story of strength, resilience and loss. Very many thanks,<br />CeinwenAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11145727006327466838noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-15188200348126382632018-06-15T12:28:53.930+01:002018-06-15T12:28:53.930+01:00Beautifully written and heart-rending, but somehow...Beautifully written and heart-rending, but somehow uplifting as well. A powerful piece. David Hensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13683380054995884030noreply@blogger.com