tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post2587771980100460652..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Home and Dry by Anne DorrianCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-39251963323656418002022-06-05T17:40:37.124+01:002022-06-05T17:40:37.124+01:00Loved this, especially the setting description. So...Loved this, especially the setting description. So very well done--I really liked this one at the opening, set the tone very well, very succinctly. "The clear sea lapped at the seashell-coloured beach that was dotted with washed up seaweed. Behind that were palm trees, hibiscus, bougainvillea, and brush, every now and then a little clearing, a little grass, where small birds with long beaks stalked. And then more thick foliage. It was quite beautiful, almost bizarrely so." Bravo.<br />Jim Lathamhttps://jimlatham.substack.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-25310919274497202442022-05-16T07:52:44.012+01:002022-05-16T07:52:44.012+01:00Vivid setting and details, felt like I was right t...Vivid setting and details, felt like I was right there on the island, very descriptive imagery. And the crime story pulls you along right through to the end.Edward Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07490305499236322340noreply@blogger.com