tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post2618338042806412641..comments2024-03-28T16:06:50.879+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Ambush by Phil TemplesCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-59988130554164249992022-09-03T22:24:05.963+01:002022-09-03T22:24:05.963+01:00nice pacing! I like the glimpse you gave us of thi...nice pacing! I like the glimpse you gave us of this worldAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-29214199191389337862022-06-28T18:57:49.058+01:002022-06-28T18:57:49.058+01:00I think the butterflies and hopscotch were diversi...I think the butterflies and hopscotch were diversionary tactics. Very clever. A good military scifi. <br />— D. HensonAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-1396993272843501932022-06-27T19:35:51.166+01:002022-06-27T19:35:51.166+01:00Yikes - What did the butterflies mean? More Preda...Yikes - What did the butterflies mean? More Predator more than Rambo.Doug Hawleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01614693152638319363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-66243617788366195682022-06-27T11:25:52.838+01:002022-06-27T11:25:52.838+01:00Hint of a bleak bleak worldHint of a bleak bleak worldAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com