tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post2645042452340886517..comments2024-03-29T12:58:34.121+00:00Comments on FICTION on the WEB short stories: Books to Read, Stories to Write by Mark Joseph KevlockCharlie Fishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04834189452905372024noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-42559116103873844452019-03-02T07:41:19.590+00:002019-03-02T07:41:19.590+00:00Good story, be careful what you wish for!Good story, be careful what you wish for!Steve Haywoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17220042365255077206noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-35185871623901236422019-02-26T20:17:44.529+00:002019-02-26T20:17:44.529+00:00Great dialogue and good ending. Great dialogue and good ending. Patrick Ritterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16235970043155752374noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-47473805135809879462019-02-23T14:42:20.978+00:002019-02-23T14:42:20.978+00:00If you can't get along with yourself, you can&...If you can't get along with yourself, you can't get along with anyone. Sure enough. I can't stand living with myself, actually. Funny story. I mean, he was just trying to get more time in the day. Beware of what you wish for!Harris Onnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-59485303169448704802019-02-22T18:36:48.712+00:002019-02-22T18:36:48.712+00:00a very original and clever story with inviting and...a very original and clever story with inviting and flowing dialogue<br /><br /> <br /><br />Mike McCMike McCnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-49893036570371497892019-02-22T14:16:52.980+00:002019-02-22T14:16:52.980+00:00Witty and original and with a sharp point at the e...Witty and original and with a sharp point at the end. Very nice. David Hensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13683380054995884030noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-155197540326010032.post-1870822624531784872019-02-22T09:16:45.441+00:002019-02-22T09:16:45.441+00:00Funny story, very enjoyable! Great rhythm to the d...Funny story, very enjoyable! Great rhythm to the dialogue. Gareth Clarkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08876312181744364680noreply@blogger.com